Sunday, July 28, 2013

The Sound Comments

Rating: 4.2

In your group you do not take me in
Or I do not like to mix up with you all
In either way you may take
But the sound you produce
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Abdul Wahab
COMMENTS
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 July 2013

Maybe sound is only one way for them. They cannot hear whether we go low or high. Either way we cannot reach the normal state after that. Beautiful poem.

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David Wood 29 July 2013

This sounds like a government in action against the people. A good write.

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Tribhawan Kaul 29 July 2013

This poem of yours remind me of our politicians. A deep write. Happy writing.

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