Monday, August 26, 2013

The Souls Pathway Comments

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We each must search through the
darkness to find our own way
steer our vessel to a safe harbor
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Heather Burns
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Om Chawla 29 August 2013

Loved your poem. However I have one comment to make. You have written: once a soul has found its true path and completed the work it has been sent to do.... If every soul is leading a pre-ordained path then there would be no sinner nor any saint. The role of Mind and Soul in charting the course of life is a very complex matter and has defied resolution except perhaps through the concept of 'Karma' which again would necessitate acceptance of concept of 'Rebirth' and 'Transmigration of Soul'

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Vipins Puthooran 27 August 2013

Death is not the end just a stepping stone to a higher plane))) I believe it so... Thanks of sharing this poem; ;

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Deepak Sawhney 26 August 2013

Perhaps what you say is a universal law of nature. To be born, procreate & vanish, yet exist eternally. May I request you to have a dekko on Pilgrimage to immortality. The soul's pathway is 'Karma' - the very cause & reason for one's existence (nothing to do with religion but a way of life) . A beautiful read & great depth in the thought. Thank you for the share.

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Unwritten Soul 26 August 2013

The end line close the poem beautifully....and i agreed with you in each word_Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 August 2013

truth lies there here in this poem HB.. lovely deserve

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Clarence Prince 26 August 2013

Death is not the end just a stepping stone to higher plane. Well said, Heather, may you be blessed!

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Lyn Paul 26 August 2013

I to follow your path, this too makes death possibly a little easier to bare. A great title too.

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