Saturday, November 24, 2012

The Soul Painter Comments

Rating: 4.8

Through my window pane
I see now the sun rays

as my painting board stands adjacent to the window
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Yewande Adedokun
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Mahtab Bangalee 16 August 2019

But I want a bright colour for my painting to be attractive deep within, I know I feel nothing bright from all perspective...//// excellent, superb poetic expression o the soul painter yeah, the painter paint the soul with the love without the pain....../////

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2016

In an instance, a sense of belonging overwhelmed my feelings as the gray hue made me remember my past not yet ending I said to myself, blue might be perfect for my wedding even as this gray does fit me more perfectly now that am dying. belonging, past not ending, wedding, i am dying. i could not connect all these together. but stillllll this is a great poem.. thank you dear poet. tony

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Emmanuel Odum 17 January 2016

Beautifully penned.

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 July 2015

hope my translation will not ''hurt'' your poem.. ;)

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 July 2015

what about translating ''The Soul Painter'' into Italian, for the Anthology ebook? Let me know. Thank you

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Nel Omofolarin 09 July 2015

This is simply awesome.the mood, the flow is almost perfectly tuned to thrill all who loves poetry

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Ramesh Rai 18 October 2013

lovely write with a beautiful story.

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Ramesh Rai 18 October 2013

lovely write with a beautiful story.

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Shihabudheen K J 23 September 2013

fabulous imagination power yewande

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Kelvin Owusu 20 September 2013

a wonderful story, this paints a picture with each line read, great write

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Payal Parande 28 November 2012

when i started to read it.it was like i am listening to a story a fairy-tell, different yet breathtaking story...i can think of words to express my feeling my reactions toward this piece it is incredible the thought the color the picture you drawn for the readers it is just incredible i am really proud to say that you are my friend mam................... thank you for sharing this wonderful piece love payal

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