The dying sun gleamered in the west
Painting bloody hues of abstract
And that paints are painted best
When all senses betray the fact.
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wala akong masabe talaga..... magaling ka sister. sana ikaw ang maging soulmate ko. love lots, melvin
Rezeile, I love the passion poured into this writing. Lovely! 10! Dorothy
hello, dear soul of my heart, how are you now my dear binibini sana lagi kang masaya at mawiwili gagawa ng tula na kawili-wili. well, you got another great poem i like this one sister. keep penning, love lots, melvin
nicely done... hehehe simply elegant... the calmness of the environment seemed to be it's saddest... emphasized by the usage of paintings to immortalize the scene... It urges the reader to want to feel what is really between the lines... 'the painter of dusk, the lights of night'- i really liked this line...