Sunday, September 24, 2017

The Sorrowful Sky Comments

Rating: 4.7

The sorrowful sky
Looks grim, her face has darkened
To shade of ash grey
Soon the heaviness would burst
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Nudershada Cabanes
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 September 2022

a truly beautiful write Top 54

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 September 2022

A fantastic poem dear poetess... appreciated. Top score! !

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Rajendran Muthiah 24 September 2017

Teas of rain drops from a dark sky sometimes wreak havoc in earth killing all the beings.

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Nudershada Cabanes 24 September 2017

Thank you for your comment on my poem. Yes rains when it fall continuously for days may wreak havoc to life.

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