Monday, September 5, 2011

The Sorrowful Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.5

The sorrowful Shadow cast far from home,
Surrounded by people and yet all alone,
Consoled by her dreams of a distant shore,
The prospect of seeing that land once more.
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Daniel P Martin
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Sharron Stephenson 07 September 2011

it is a sweet heart felt poem the lines will connect to different poeple in situs which may be simular to yours

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Unwritten Soul 06 September 2011

Right..it's deep meaning to you as i look the sound that written by..nice, Sorrowful shadow just a shadow...a shadow just follow nothing but the object it mimic, sorrowful shadow you see because sorrowful heart you beat...There's always a way to hide it, to keep u free from such shadow..A light will in front will creates shadow behind, if you have a light around so no shadow to bound...Daniel, maybe if you ask me where to find a light to be around you all time...i has no answer but the light exist when you start to believe...to dream...shadow is not always something sad, it moves like what the object acts.. ond day i would like to hear, you walk along with smiley shadow..good luck! _Unwritten Soul

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Shadow Girl 05 September 2011

Beautiful..true meaning xo

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