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good phrasology! fine thoughtful poem! well done! 10+

Listening to inner voices leads to knowledge or JNANA and then to atonement, MOKSHA in Sanscrit.....right sign

A nice composition, Love it with 10.

I give you 9. Keep composing your verses for such ideas, that send the message of Hope, in a world of dispute, destruction, emptiness, doubt. Only we, the poets, can bring the Hope in this misery.

Lovely poem- great writing :)

Another very good composition. Enjoyed it. Love the hope at the end.