Monday, May 31, 2010

The Sons Of Men Comments

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the sons of men will rather die
in the flattery smoke of lies
than live in peace and solitude
in the sincere light of truth.
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CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER
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the sons of men will rather die in the flattery smoke of lies Very good lines, as 'Pontius Pilate Said' What is truth? Your poem seems to answer the lines about, the heart of men, being bad from youth upwards

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All of creation is waiting for the sons of God to be revealed..Restoration of all things. Good write. Well done; D

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 14 June 2010

I have to say it's not often I find another poet who I keep an eye on, but I'll definetly be reading more of your poems, this to will go on my fav. poem list. I often thought aspiring to be men was to small a goal anyway

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Ben Bergeth 11 June 2010

FANTASTIC! This is one of the best poems I have ever read.10/10

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CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

Kaduna, Nigeria
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