{the Sonnet Of My Hearts Desires} Comments

'For you my beloved, fullfill my heart's desires'...is a summation of a ture love! Sublime poem, highest mark.

Then, of course, there are those who forget entire words, like''Send a private message to this poet'...but we all can't be tactfull, for if so, how else would the world wide web be notified of our rare literary faux-pas? ! This is a gorgeous piece of work...Smooth, mellifluous, and captivating... There a most likely millions of ways to express Passion via the written word... Yours is most definitely one of the better ways! Excellent Work, young lady. ~ ~ ~

This was very nice! I liked it very much, :) I only have one question for you. 'One who hears my when I speak of love' I was kinda confused here with this 'my'. I know exactly what you're saying, but something's missing. Maybe you forgot to type a word? : P Nice job with the poem.