Sunday, May 6, 2018

The Song Was So Enchanting Comments

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The song it lingered in my mind
a song I'd heard before.
It taunted me and beguiled me
as I knew I knew it more.
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Hazel Durham 12 May 2018

So original and brilliant write Alan with a beautiful flow and rhythm!

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Naila Rais 10 May 2018

A great write.. I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too.. Naila

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The Muse 10 May 2018

Very touching poem Alan

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 May 2018

Fantastic expression on war memories. I love most lines are....... Just then a bolt of lighting struck a tree outside my door. And the words that had taunted me were spread out on the floor. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... The song was so enchanting that I took it to my heart Because I never ever wanted my memory's..... Marvelous poem.10

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Rajnish Manga 06 May 2018

Very touching and impressive- song. Thanks.

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A lovely poignant poem full of great memories. Beautifully crafted write.10

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