The Song Of Puppies Comments

This poem says a lot about someone (or some people) who has been abandund with no one caring for him. It sounds sad. The ''puppies'' are just there watching what ought to have been for them being snatched away by those who are stronger. I like the poem. KEEP IT UP!

we puppies squeeze in corners while big dogs eat with growls I'm doing it again, picking out a couple of lines I particularly like... I like the poem as a whole, but this couplet gives me a clear picture of the unfairness of life.

Like it, enjoyed reading it a great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Drug Fueled.

Like it, enjoyed reading it a great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Drug Fueled.