The Song Of Numbers Comments

Well achieved apart from EIGHT and TEN which I found a little weak!

I really enjoyed this piece.

Really fabulous! ! ! Really inspirational! ! ! You have given me great thoughts about writing a new poem... Thanks a lot for such a masterpiece

Marvelous! ! ! Original idea of number, seductive.

Beautiful composition …but this numbering different in my mother Land… by 1 Moon 2 Lunar cycle [new moon and full moon] 3 eyes [2 plus third eye] 4 Vedas and so on… Thanks 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

oh my! what an intelligent BOY! i really think you can do more than this, SO KEEEEEEEEP WRITING! ! ! ! I LUVVV THIS!

I really like this poem.....creative thinking..10+++++++++++++++

Yes first poem I read here is so cute....I can to learn it my grandson :)

Great! The poem reminds me of Kindergarten. Like twinkle Twinkle L'il Star. Creativity was employed and learning exhibited. Omar, you are a wonderful poet.

attractive from the first line. i wish i could became a child once again =)

Wonderful! I love the thought you put in the numbers!

interesting...refreshing very imaginative...creative.. like a nursery song if read with a tone, anybody could love this... 10 lovelots, Maia

Very, very ambiguous But very good, nonetheless

Wow sweet work! a creative piece deep and intelligent imagery you combine numbers and matters nice is your song of numbers keep it up, break away your talent write other poems, your style is so lovely ......... 10

Fine diction! sweet indeed! excellent! 10+

wow... great job! short, sweet and memorable. a 10 for you

Very clever and memorable: and how many characters to fill a comment box just full enough? I am still learning that one..(smile)

Fun! Not only does this teach the numbers, but it does so with learning. It teaches more than just numbers! This poem has history, love and intelligence. Thank you for your invitation to read this lovely piece of art. Truly a written work of love. DC

ONE god created the world TWO eyes to read the word...yes lmighty has given us everything and we should pray him regularly... it is he who looks us after...10 read mine prayer for friend... how are u? god bless you, god bless only those

Here come the red star of Egypt, the great country' s priceless son! Culture means how well you feel at poverty. Ko Oo