Wednesday, February 6, 2019

The Song Of Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel like losing me from deep dark night,
Loosening from shackles of gravity,
Wonder, if stars guide me, lead me with light,
If birds land me their wings to set me free.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 06 February 2019

dear come; this is life, not so easy; no so tough its restful, its busy come; sing a song of life for an important operation is to begin or a change to take effect..........

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Thank you, Mahtab Bangalee, you're poetic in your feedback too.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

If silver of moon remains softly lit, Let me swoon with ecstasy when birds sing.....these two fascinating lines are my favorite lines! This is a unique poem with different tone that I find in Longfellow's Psalm of life! An elegant piece of poetry with inbuilt lyrical intensity....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Thank you, Dr Swain, you know better, for, I'm no student of literature.

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