The Song Of Life! Comments

nice theme and nice way of expression.

beautiful poem.... just beautiful.

Hope will rule the way of the world. In our theme of life. Beautiful words. Have a beautiful day Every day providing your song of life

Wow, this is amazing.

Fantastic write. I can see all the lovely comments and I agree with them as no words are left for me to write.. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

This optimistic note from you have come like a real song on life we aspire for.... The poet in you are elevated to still a higher platform with this write Miss Shahzia Batool.

Yes. Every crucifixion will result in a resurrection. Whether its Christ, or sun or even memories for that matter. Great write Ma'am!

This is a fantastic write Shahzia! Retaliation or reciprocation depends on how we touch the waters.... The theme of this poem is truely the theme of life! Digging the heels deep into the slippery sands is a beautiful image! !

Reactive indeed, unknown, great mystery.

a excellent write on the song of life. and we all sing that song the last stanza so lovely.

life will come life will go but resonance of song of life shall ever be echoing through ages

Superb poem - love the last verse, reminiscent of the Law of Karma. It depends on how you touch the waters - great line, deep and meaningful.

The Song of Life depicts your immense love for Nature. Each stanza glistens, Shahzia! Well written!

The hope of nature will survive all thing that we throw at it. I wonder.... A good poem Shahzia.

Ripples of reaction or reciprocation depend on how you touch the waters. In spite of all that we know, nature is still unpredictable. Captured in the poem beautifully. Thank you.

“In the hour of adversity be not without hope For crystal rain falls from black clouds” a persian proverb for this nature poem with a message of hope.10 marks.

''the buds will bloom the birds will sing the hope will rule the way of the world the Sun will do the role of the Christ in the play of resurrection and crucifixion; '''' this beautiful stanza sums up the theme of the poem so beautifully, , i will not add any more words to my opinion on this lovely poem, , this is simple at face value, but so highly philosophical when read between the lines, a poet and critic of shahzia's caliber can compose such a poem, ,

the hopes Nature nurtures, and sometimes the glooms of despair, rise through this poem.

Strong and strengthening, wonderful song of will-power in life.

A tuneful song composed on the strings of life ' the melodies of existence' like 'downpours on slaked' souls and drops on parched lips...sometimes I think if our hearts were not blessed with the love of Nature how we would express our sober feelings of gloom and happiness.