Monday, February 4, 2013

The Song Of Hypatia (Ad 415) Comments

Rating: 4.8

For heresy and negating the heavenly laws
Hypatia was deprived from all honours and applause.

Let me confess my crime,
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John Shea 08 March 2013

rather interesting never heard of the woman before good write

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Kevin Patrick 26 February 2013

I actually learned of Hypatia from a textbook and the movie you mentioned, a brave and intelligent women who suffered the ordeal of living in an age which looked down on reason. A stellar write Mr John especially liked the secound last stanza. A good subject to capture well in this prose of verse

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Shahzia Batool 16 February 2013

For the first time i read about her here, by this poem and the comments on it i added things to my knowledge, you are reviving the history, legends and myths...it's good! thank you!

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Asif Andalib 10 February 2013

Wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it a lot.

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Valsa George 10 February 2013

This is indeed a wonderful poem! The case of the lady who refused to restrain her wit and wisdom and got butchered by Christian fanatics is a black mark in Christianity whose founder professed the lessons of tolerance and love in the place of hatred and violence and practised it showing unconditional forgiveness to those who crucified him!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 08 February 2013

So beautiful and meaningful. i love all the lines of this great and excellent work. a perfect Gift to that brave lady. well done.

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Hazel Durham 06 February 2013

What a brave and noble lady, she wasn't going to give up what she believed to be true and she paid the price with her life, murdered by so called Christian fanatics! Brilliant write! !

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 06 February 2013

Such deeply rooted feelings in this poem. Intense.

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Unwritten Soul 06 February 2013

I really like the poem, it flows beautifully without missing any single beautiful plots..a good continuity, i maybe not a writer but i know what poems i like_Soul

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Stevie Taite 05 February 2013

I always like to read the cleverly constructed introductions to and interpretations of all of the fascinating people and legends you chose to write these little gems about. Thanks dear poet.: -)

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Thomas Cox 05 February 2013

I am a supporter and believer in and, or, of the Bible (Tanakh) , but not a Christian. Sadly, Christianity has made many a tragic mistake within the time frame of its recorded history. I believe, at one point or another in time the same can and, or, could be said of many other religions, including my own. We humans so often are such a cruel lot for creatures who so desperately need each other and crave after each others approval, support, and forgiveness, while withholding these very same ever so desperate and desired needs to others. I personally believe that when properly viewed and applied both science and scripture can work and walk hand in hand and when occasion arises that they simply cannot, and so men of both persuasions must agree to disagree, then those seeking truth in the spirit of understanding and cooperation will not resort to violence and foul behavior in asserting their views and opinions over those of others. This is an excellent poem and a bit tragic of history I was totally unaware of...

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Dickson Mseti 05 February 2013

My wit and wisdom shall never be restrained WELL CONNECTED. YOU ARE AMAZING AND KEEP ON WRITING. read mine A CONFUSED SOUL

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Bright Morn 05 February 2013

Great poem Gulsher. the song of hypatia who espoused martyrdom instead giving up her cause and who was executed for negating the divine laws. I liked the start of the poem For heresy and negating the heavenly laws Deprived from all honor and applause. Well done john

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Valerie Dohren 05 February 2013

Interesting and fascinating read John.

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