The Song Of Heaven (Sonnet) Comments

please give the explanation of this.THANK YOU GOD BLESS

A wonderful tribute to the one you love, Aufie. The content is excellent. The presentation could be improved a little if you used less syllables in some of the lines, you lose the flow somewhat otherwise. For instance....................... So much I love sounds and sights of the sea Much more dear's still, the love ‘tween you and me....................... I love the sounds and sights of the sea, Much more dear still, your love for me.

if a horizon is a distance to face for heaven and sea to meet on the surface for both to touch & that must be the eternal seed if angels sing, and if the melody from heaven borrowed All the universe will far from world sorrow Love it Hans_Soul

The journey is depicted with wrapper of true love.Fantastic sonnet.

Such an amazing tribute to your wife. Thank you

This is a delightful sonnet. A beautiful painting, sounds and emotion superbly blended.

Wonderful heavenly song so far composed in meaningful way. Music of sea is heart touching. So much love sounds and nicely dedicated to your wife. Wonderful poem shared.

Sea and its music are so captivating! That is why the beaches are frequented by hordes of people! The song of the gentle waves and the roar of breakers are equally enthralling! A Sweet dedication to your 'lovely wife!

A beauty swimming like a mermaid in the ocean of poetry...............10