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And the fishes underneath swim with heavenly smile....love it :)
I have read the sonnet first and then the haiku version; being very fond of haiku, all I can say is - I love it! A great haiku!
What a lovely idea! A love song responded by a kiss that stole the aurora......................10
Beautiful three lines of heaven's love of earth. Indeed, all creation sing the love song of heaven. Good reflection.
Nice song......Liked it