The Song Of Going Poem by Afrooz Jafarinoor

The Song Of Going

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It's snowing and I'm thinking
Of the road taking the traveler
Farther and farther
To where, I don't know,
But there's something I know:

Wherever it ends
In light or night
It will be a bit ahead
Closer to the mountain head!

But look how I'm stuck
In talk and talk
As if in snow I walk.

It's snowing and I
Am eager to fly
Go over roads
And observe no codes
Of where to go
With whom to go!

To go and get free,
Move ahead and be
A friend of the road
And live a new mode!

Now...just let me go,
I can't stay! ...No!

Sunday, August 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: going
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 December 2015

Verily, life is to move on, Move on towards the peaks

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Nathan Coppedge 16 August 2015

It might be more appropriate to say 'Closer to the mountain head'. Otherwise, good!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 16 August 2015

You're right dear Nathan! I'll correct it!

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