The Song Of Breavement Comments

So impressive that it touched the heart................................

Superb write Jasmine, especially the last two stanza very beautifully portrayed...Loved reading it..

My condolence! it's very naturally written Yasmeen, though the mourner does not understand at that moment but it is true as you said: Light up the patience’s lantern like those who- to Providence knelt

Your comprehension is that of a genius.

the last two stanzas are beautifully written. a good message to all

Love conquers all and time is a good healer and let nature take it’s course in all things

you have a great hand in writing poetry, i am sure if you continue you will be one day a great poetess....i enjoyed this poem... aw

Nature is the same everyday. When sadness shows up, nature reflects it. Nicely brought out. Thank you.

Yes, this is life as you say: love, joys, sadness, and a short happiness sometimes. You are observing well.