The Song Of A Night Bird Comments

Looking into the dark pockets of the night, I thought of human mind, a deep gorge With many an uninhabitable corner Where serpent desires lie coiled Scorpions crawl with toxic pincers Predators roam to prey upon helpless victims.....best observative lines. This is really a beautiful philosophical poem having stunning expression with nice penmanship.10

Like a night bird Roosting among the branches of a tree I sing of my heart aches, Of my yearnings and longings A beautiful poem.....................................10

splendid. worth repeating again and again and let imagination run wild in the darkness of the night. let the 'pen' becomes lantern to the night bird. keep singing night bird... keep singing....

going with to create is a beautiful thing. excellent

A journey through self...it may be taken at a symbolic level like ' The Heart of Darkness'.

a delirious journey through the night in poetic trance! penned with flair.

very good creation, I like it. deep thought herein.

I thought of human mind, a deep gorge With many an uninhabitable corner Beautiful song of the night bird exploring the corners of the mind. It's real. It's surreal. It's natural. Seems to delve into all areas. Thank you.

A great creative write. Let us wander always untethered and walk sleep or in waking dream and journey to places unknown safe or dangerous but always confronting and challenging of our imaginations to draw out inky blood of sweated mind and never know enough and never tire or searching those calling from those elusive dark void beaks. Thank you for a great poem.

There is a saying that night time is the right time. Just sitting in the dark night can fine tune the senses. It helps you to delve deep in the surroundings and to do some soul searching. Sounds, aromas, and feelings comes alive in this type of scenario. Owls and cuckoo birds sing their melodious tunes; A very potent write Valsa.

Valsa in our dream when we walk sound is heard Ghost of our thought all dreamt so the concluding lovely 10

a very scary night u have described Mam as yes am scared of ghosts........cant even imagine myself in this dreadful night amongst the night bird song and the howling of wolves! ! ! ! But your poem carried me in this night world so beautifully experiencing the sight of the night. Very nicely linked it to the poets heart singing his heartaches through poems. Do not ever put your pen down, else we will all have to frown: -) a gud write Mam, as always.

Oh! Poet, you rewind my memories Of a no mans land Where I lived for years watching into the dark pockets of night- Thanks

It is quite interesting to note that you are empowered by the dark night and you begin to sing like a night bird awake. It is better than dreaming in the middle of a sound sleep. Let the ghosts walk the earth for a while and if they too happen to hear you, they will will be metamorphosed into angels and elves instantly. A good poem that can be read at night or during the dreary day time, madam Valsa. Hope you are not a somnambulist in real!

After reading this poem and after experiencing what you experienced, feeling what you felt and seeing what you saw one can only say there is no wonder that if you decide not to put your pen down, you will keep on exploring the beauty of the audible whispers of the night... the night bird is a rarely experienced phenomenon but by those who spend nights in the eyes, and reproduce these songs of the night birds who have creative and sensitive souls... a masterpiece valsa ji! ! !

My dear friend, I could read this poem over and over again each time to find something new to feel. Oh it describe so well the travels of the mind, th visits in between the lands the joy of creation! I loved this poem, thank you for your share!

Great poem Valsa poets are very often night birds well written