Saturday, July 11, 2009

The Song In Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

My life is a song
when i walk i feel the beat..

walking thru your streets
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Steven Pimentel
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Allan Macli Borges 25 July 2009

what a beautiful poem. life is a long lasting song, let's keep the beat up!

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Omar Ibrahim 24 July 2009

wow! ! ! stunning! ! ! ! keep writing and show us what is in your mind! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 16 July 2009

beat up, beat down and keep dancing to the beat of the drums and dance to the rhythm of your song to keep your life lively...a provoking theme written....

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Linda Weischedel 15 July 2009

Keep that song in you! !

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Ruth Walters 14 July 2009

How wonderful to feel you have a song in your heart, a rhythm in your feet..... Ruthy

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Raj Nandy 13 July 2009

IF YOU HAVE SONG IN YOUR MIND AND HEART, WHY NOT TAKE TO PLAYING SAX OR THE FLUTE, I AM CERTAIN THAT WAY YOU WILL BE BETTER UNDERSTOOD! 10+ -Raj Nandy

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Angelic Warrior 13 July 2009

great write! ....the music is in you...so that you can march to the beat of your own drum......excellent...truly enjoyable... :)

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Ritty Patnaik 12 July 2009

to love music is to love god.it is great that you live in the rhythm of music and enjoy it so much.very encouraging write.thanks for sharing. ritty patnaik

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Ramesh T A 12 July 2009

Singing to the beat of your walk indeed will be a joyful experience! Keep on with your beat!

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Kranthi Pothineni 12 July 2009

Your song is mealodius, keep singing. Beautiful craft.

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Chitra - 11 July 2009

a wonderful sonorous rhythm that we all call life well written

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Carol Gall 11 July 2009

love your writing so great

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Natasha Wellington 11 July 2009

Love It (= Brill Poem; My Life is A Song <3

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Ted M 11 July 2009

Nice flow and good rhythm

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Melanie Guerrero 11 July 2009

'My life is a song when i walk i feel the beat.. walking thru your streets hold on take a seat' Fav.Lines Thats qood Writtin! ! !

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Lola Hi 11 July 2009

i like it so much.i like the rythem on it.great lyrics for a song.

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