yes such moments do come in life but I feel there is a fresh morning after every sunset... your last lines are looking forward to peace...well expressed, the lines show the pain and trauma....structure and rhyme also good.....
**Abha**
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yes such moments do come in life but I feel there is a fresh morning after every sunset... your last lines are looking forward to peace...well expressed, the lines show the pain and trauma....structure and rhyme also good..... **Abha**