Tuesday, May 6, 2008

The Song Has Ended Comments

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The song has ended & that's been long, long ago
I do not want you anymore, Now will you please go.

To your words I have closed all windows & doors
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karan baadkar
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Abha Sharma 06 May 2008

yes such moments do come in life but I feel there is a fresh morning after every sunset... your last lines are looking forward to peace...well expressed, the lines show the pain and trauma....structure and rhyme also good..... **Abha**

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 06 May 2008

good rhyming..............nice one to read.

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Karwar, Karnataka, INDIA
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