Thursday, November 1, 2012

The Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wound was raw,
The gore was red
The wind was cold,
From the north it fled
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ritwika raha
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Asif Andalib 27 November 2012

Beautiful flow and rhyme. Outburst of heartfelt emotions. Lovely. Keep it up

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Sudeshna Majumdar 02 November 2012

Beautifully weaved- the thought, the words, the rhyme, the moments... :) :)

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