The Song Comments

So much wisdom in this wonderful poem. A ten easily.

our life and youth have gone. Our beauty fades as our souls grow wiser................................ .time still wades through eternal stream lo behold! mortality sways and swaddles yet swaggering of luminous beauty onshore but slowly warping into sheath of oblivion., fantastic way of realizing the flow of time in which we are all ephemeral and supposed to be obscured, yet write of unique genre,10++, thanks for sharing

I lifes message, stop to smell the roses, then we would hear the song. Lifes business really consumes us at times. Well penned, my friend. Enjoyable read; D