Thursday, January 29, 2009

The Son I Never Knew I Had Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking down the street one day
I saw a little lad
The boy just danced right up to me
and said 'You are my dad! '
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Florence P. Wordsmith
Dad
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Dmitri Romanovski 06 February 2009

if ever there was a reason to hate children, this would sum it up. my heart breaks.

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Sylvia Matzek 02 February 2009

i feel conflicted. the boy received a kidney, but the man hates children. Now he will never want one of his own, maybe its a good thing. The population is already too big...maybe more people should hate children. good thinking.

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Patti Masterman 29 January 2009

Arghhh, you did it again! How many times am I going to get taken in by your tales? I love this; it's wonderfully long and engrossing. And, maybe I can use some of it next Saturday when I need my own excuse! Great job.

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Aldo Kraas 29 January 2009

This poem was very interesting

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maggie murray 29 January 2009

wow, loved it, sad, but still loved it...Maggie

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