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This is very similar to my poem, which is in my book " The Sky and the Sea: Poetry and Prose."

Really a nice poem Isabella....

To fight for all and lose for none, In tormenting me life has great fun. A very lovely poem Isabella. I like the rhyming and the message you impart. Sadly you lose the metered flow in the last three stanzas, which is a shame (too many syllables) . You are a very talented young lady. Congratulations on being chosen for poem of the day.

Very Beautiful poem. I dive for Pearls To glitter others life... Though no one cares for me Whatever I do it for anyone. But there is someone who is behind the scene Watching me with care I am so sure about her That she will surely come to rescue me. Ending of the poem is powerful with positive words.. Really I loved reading your poem Isabella....Thanks for this lovely poem. Congrats! Its your poem is chosen for poem of the day!

how lovely Isabella writes, her mind of a philosophic...... In an attempt to make others' life glitter, I dive for pearls and for life splutter. But behind the scenes there is someone who is waiting for a cue, And she, is sure to come to my rescue.

GOOD...I really like the concept as it grows and brings the friend in forefront.......

OK, the theme is not original, and bestest is a terrible grammatical mistake...

She comes to make sure I am scared and spared.

Kee and Saint Thanks a lot for your appreciation.. It was one of my first poems Thanks a lot... :)

poetry is the flow from the soul to song But behind the scenes there is someone who is waiting for a cue, And she, is sure to come to my rescue. Even when I'm utterly scared,

Great, ths is absolutely great. My girlfriend is kinda goin through same sleepless nights and am hopin 2 get her read this even though she is not into poems. But artistically its a great poem. Luv it.

Thanks Prachi and Abhishek...

A true poet never writes a single word he just pours his heart out.. Here you have done that.. Be true with your words be true with your feelings, .like in this poem, always.. All the best

amazing.............

Thank you so much....

Great, especialy considering your age. Read good poems of classical poets. Write a lot. Belive that you are a good writer. You will be a No 1 poetess of tomorrow. Best regards, sam