Friday, March 31, 2017

The Solitary Pigeon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The solitary pigeon grey upon the roof,
Transfixed he stands, and looks ahead
In utmost tranquillity; then, vigilantly
Moves his head around, and up, and down,
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Tom Allport 23 May 2017

a wonderful poem of a short meeting of two very different life forces? .........well written

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Buried Alive 01 April 2017

You capture that very moment so uniquely, painting an image in my mind with all its subtle nuances And then surprising me at the end with that wonderful delightful exclamation- Zowie couldn't be more appropriate. Such a beautifully crafted poem I've read over and over.  I  wish I had the right words to fully compliment thus exquisite writing.

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