Why does she look so disgruntled?
Why does her body seem shriveled?
Has life been unkind to her?
Have the angels deserted her?
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Every girl needs a support system to help her go through life's disappointments, and yes they should make us more strong. Its a well thought piece
Hoplessness mixed with hope i like the way you chose your words to deliver the message.
Thanks for sharing the poem its quite as insight into lost thoughts but hope is there
'The world seem to have taught her lessons'! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for sharing Rose. The character seem so lost in thoughts, that have hindered the brighter part of life. 'Destiny was about to be printed bright but she didn't notice'
A well thought of style i liked it