Monday, September 12, 2016

The Soliloquy Of The Missus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does she look so disgruntled?
Why does her body seem shriveled?
Has life been unkind to her?
Have the angels deserted her?
...
Read full text

Rose Kanana
COMMENTS
Brenda Aniban 08 December 2016

A well thought of style i liked it

1 0 Reply
Eliza Mwendwa 31 October 2016

Every girl needs a support system to help her go through life's disappointments, and yes they should make us more strong. Its a well thought piece

1 0 Reply
James Mwenda 20 September 2016

Hoplessness mixed with hope i like the way you chose your words to deliver the message.

8 0 Reply
Ruth Nyokabi 12 September 2016

Thanks for sharing the poem its quite as insight into lost thoughts but hope is there

6 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 12 September 2016

'The world seem to have taught her lessons'! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

7 0 Reply
Collins Waswa 12 September 2016

Thanks for sharing Rose. The character seem so lost in thoughts, that have hindered the brighter part of life. 'Destiny was about to be printed bright but she didn't notice'

5 0 Reply
Rose Kanana

Rose Kanana

Kenya
Close
Error Success