Tuesday, June 12, 2018

The Solemn Painter Of Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

One day, I meet the wanderer
Suddenlybutterflies flying within
But pushesthe butterfly away
Suddenly the wanderer alighted in my dreams
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Charlene Moralesbalintona
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Charlene. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 13 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Charlene.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2018

I am fascinated with this beautiful poem! I greatly admire the beauty of your poetic expression. 'The vivid canvas and beautiful landscape suddenly moves my heart' Loved reading it. I vote this poem with a 10

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Rajnish Manga 12 June 2018

Great imagery and a fantasy. It creates an atmosphere of joy. Thanks, Charlene. I am tempted to repeat your concluding words: You impressed me in many ways I'm delightedly flying with your butterflies.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 June 2018

he wanderer alighted in my dreams and paints my dreams happily... i am flying with your butterflies....... a flight of imagination conveying the joy of your heart. thank u dear poet, tony

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