Friday, October 20, 2006

The Soldier Comments

Rating: 4.0

I stand high upon the castle wall
Looking over the parapet
At the grassy plain below
And the distant misty, undulating hills
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 October 2006

A Masterful work, Marilyn...You paint a pictorial story for your Readers, like me, to become engulfed in.....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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R H 20 October 2006

Great poignancy to this Marilyn. The last line resounds. Kind regards, Justine

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