Thursday, August 9, 2012

The Soldier Comments

Rating: 5.0

The silence is broken by a sudden sound
the soldier drops quickly to the ground
as he looks around to find a safe place
the fear clearly written all over his face.
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Monica Partridge
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Guy Lip-more 09 August 2012

Very good poem, simply penned and easy on the eye, really good write.

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Alice -praises-''yhvh'' 09 August 2012

Dear Monica, What a marvelous poem you have written for all who fight throughout this world, to keep all free of evil doers. Thank you for letting us read it. Alice

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Denis Martindale 09 August 2012

Survival of the spirit is sometimes based on the sacrifice of the flesh. Perhaps today we walk free, while some soldiers can't walk at all. That's why we should wear our poppies with pride and support the Royal British Legion and other charities.

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