The Solar Jazz Comments

You present here a vivid picture of the nature in April, Oleg! I like your shift of viewpoint very much- you start with a general description of sunbeam, and transits smoothly to how it radiates the earth, the street, the tree, the mound. Then, you hold back a bit to the sun itself (contour, energy...) before sewing another dreary, forbearing image of the earth. I think I can learn many things from your poems! Thank you!