The Soft Playing Wind Comments

i like this one VERY much. and it is better-written than the other one. i WOULD use any one, not anyone here. anyone is good for Is anyone home? :) i especially enjoyed: At times it feels fragile, but that's not the case, it's strong and agile. and The wind is not alloted to anyone place. Have you ever wanted to query it as it blew in your face? It can be tumult at times and humdrum at others. It wasn't taught any better it has no mother. and i like the repeating phrase/title: The soft playing wind and how you played with it at the ending. very nice. i'll send this to MyPoemList. bri :)