The Soft Doll Comments

Soon the doll was manufactured I stole it and ran away to the earth. Beautiful lines.

That's a beautiful doll in a pink dress! Pretty and adorable! Who would not try to steal it and run away? A delightful poem, Akhtar Sahab! 10+++

Your imagination had been turned into a creative piece of writing. Thank you sir, lovely read.

A beautiful woman is an incarnation of all that you crave for..... soft, delicate, colorful and lovely....! Artists in general are lovers of beauty! No wonder Keats sang.... A thing of beauty is a joy forever! I am equally fascinated and entertained by this piece!

An interesting poem. A woman is indeed a lovely creature that every heart longs to steal. A creative piece reflective of your deep insight.

Akhtar, I sense an interesting poem here, but your ESL(?) problems really confuse me. You do need to work more on your English idioms and improving your grasp of the language. Maybe stop writing for a while and immerse yourself in good contemporary poems (Mary Oliver, Billy Collins) in English. They would help you improve as a poet. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know you like it. Yrs, JC

A beautiful poem on softness and charms of the women.