Friday, March 26, 2010

The Snowman Comments

Rating: 5.0

The snowman was confused and didn't know why

passion and reason were in balance.
Last week, he had to face a lot of snow.
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Kamel kamel 10 September 2010

He begins to have his own consciousness that he was made by kids hands and will die soon the next sunny day this is its destiny to make that kids happy did he accepted it?

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 July 2010

He makes an effort to distinguishing between His own immortality and his existence …. ~ Virtuality well penned According to Hindu Spiritualism…Every thing in Universe are but Manifestation of Bhraman…so here poets thought reaching near to this concept… thanks sharing…Marieta congrats Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Marieta Maglas 05 April 2010

From : Amanda Jones (USA United States; Female; 17) To : Marieta Maglas Date Time : 4/3/2010 4: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : I Love your poems I read your poems! I love them! ! ! The poem 'The Snowmen' is my favorite. I Liked how you talked about the snowmens feeling. Hope you keep writing! ! Amanda Jones

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Jim John 03 April 2010

I have one word for this poem 'Splendid'

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 April 2010

a fine 'stream of consciousness writing'........ astonishing flow.......figuretive images wonderful! HIGHLY CREATIVE PIECE DEAR MARI! !

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Ruth Walters 01 April 2010

Ahhh the snowman is alive with a heart of snow and and mind, figuring out all around him. Great imagery and you have infused my imagination. Ruthie

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Marieta Maglas 31 March 2010

From: Kishore Asthana (Gurgaon India; Male; 64) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 3/29/2010 3: 24: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: My Snowman Mari, Read The Snowman. Nice. I like the idea of the Snowman acquiring consciousness. I had written the following poem during a snowstorm in Dallas where we were visiting this February.

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Noel Horlanda 30 March 2010

If I have not mistaken I already read and commented this piece. To my surprise the data was not recorded. Well anyway, I say again there is humor and sadness in each verse. Snowman is a symbol of winter, only it stood at this kind of weather but as soon as spring comes the snowman is nowhere to be found. I wish a snowman stays forever. It is unlikely because if he stays there endlessly he would not be called a snowman but a weatherman.Just like us we're only temporary in this world.

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Eyan Desir 30 March 2010

An interesting poetic write

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John Knight 29 March 2010

Snowmen melt - Mari - This lovely poem has melted my heart. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X (A poetic kiss to melt your heart) .

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Orville Phillips 29 March 2010

The content and context of this poem is carefully crafted, like the hands that made 'the snowman, '

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Rafique Farooqi 29 March 2010

based on marvellous thought a wonderful imagery, the passionate and beautiful write

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Chitra - 29 March 2010

skillfully woven with flakes of imagination. a figurative description!

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Kranthi Pothineni 28 March 2010

'Significantly, the night begins to kill the day's seconds...' expressive one. Makes to think too. Good.

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Increadably inspiration in ice. Wow! Wonderful words! 10+++++++

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Surya . 28 March 2010

at last an intellegent poet on the snow/flakes.wonderful and vivid imagery.like your lines and words.thank for shaing, voted10 surya

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Romeo Della Valle 28 March 2010

What a great poem, full of heartfelt imagery a real challenge to anyone's imagination. Mari, your lovely poems have become like your footprints and by carefully tracing them back we have a clear idea where you come from and a perfect picture of where you are definitely heading to...Keep it up! 10++++ Love and Peace...!

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Lady Grace 28 March 2010

''He begins to have his own consciousness''. nice expression marieta.. snowman...a true lovely man...

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Seema Chowdhury 28 March 2010

what a lovely and different poem. very interesting too. i enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing. take care

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