The Snowflake And The Candle Comments

Very good. Read mine - Senergy - Adeline

I gave you a ten for your portrayal of the battle of the elements.Everything in nature is a struggle and yet everything sdurvives with some sense of unity in the opposites.You have a very strong freeform writing style.

Very fine. I love the images of cold and heat balanced in tension with one another.

understandable choice of words. one shall go on. i love it

Brilliant observation. Loved the word use.

lovely! I like the words, The snowflakes gentle fall last lifted By the hot and raising winds of fate.. keep writing! could you read and comment on my poems too? Thank you.

What an amazing observation and narrative to the importance of being in the now.