Tuesday, January 9, 2024

The Snowbird - Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dark- eyed Junco
Perches upon the park bench,
Where hardened snow rests.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 01 February 2024

Magnificently painted! .. Filled with the beauty and wonder of nature! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 01 February 2024

Oh, Such beautiful and heart moving imagery! ..

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M. Asim Nehal 13 January 2024

Great imagery. Liked it.5****

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a very good poem on the little bird which at times comes down from the nest for food and sun. It's allegory is also meaningful

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 12 January 2024

Nice haiku picture, Rose Mary. Tfs

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Indira Renganathan 12 January 2024

So lovely...I am able to visualize the bird....a picturesque Haiku...liked

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Cowboy Ron Williams 11 January 2024

I love to see dark-eyed juncos! They only appear here in the winter. Nice poem!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 January 2024

brilliantly Wonderful Bravo! ! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 10 January 2024

This is a meaningful piece....thanks for sharing..

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Nabakishore Dash 10 January 2024

A nice haiku about the migratory bird that indicates winter season. With regards to u, may I ask if the poem has any other meaning.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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