The Snow, The Sun And The Evergreen Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Snow, The Sun And The Evergreen

Rating: 5.0


A blanket of snow
Embedded the evergreen
Its leaves like needles
Turned into small white candles
When the Sun comes out, they cry.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin,All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 04 July 2020

A nature lover and a great poetess can capture a moment and then put it down into words of outstanding imagery and beauty. A full score 10++ for your most engaging poem. Thank you so much Rose Marie and I wish you well.

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Anjandev Roy 04 July 2020

Such a wonderful write....thank u. anjandev roy.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2020

A well crafted composition. Simply marvelous...10++❤️❤️❤️

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 July 2020

Nice imagery the snowy blanket under the sunny heart with blooming flowers hugging shining raindrops

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 July 2020

A blanket of snow with the romance of nature! ! The horizon of life; Sunshine love to respect the rules. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rob Lamberton 06 May 2025

I love the beauty of evergreens made white by the snow. Some Words are like the sun, they melt the tears from our eyes!

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Rebecca Navarre 18 April 2025

Truly magnificent and ever so heart felt! .. A Million Stars And More! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 April 2025

Truly breath taking as I close my eyes and let myself imagine! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 18 April 2025

Oh Wow! .. Such captivating heart and beauty! ...

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Soran M. H 12 August 2020

Its leaves like needles Turned into small white candles

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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