Wednesday, April 25, 2012

The Snow Birds Comments

Rating: 4.7

They fly beneath the cotton clouds
With plumage virgin white
As angels spread their beauteous wings
To bear them on their flight
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Valerie Dohren
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Ananya N 12 January 2023

A beautiful piece of poetry🥰

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Bharati Nayak 11 January 2023

Wow---What a lovely poem with wonderful imagery! 'The snow birds on their journey wend To places set with green To bask in summer`s gentle heat To grow their plumage new Flutt`ring o`er the treetops high To sing in skies of blue'

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Rebecca Navarre 10 January 2023

And Ever so many Congratulations on Poem of the day! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 10 January 2023

Wow! .. Ever so beautifully heart touching! ... Beyond #'S! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Cristobal Benjumea 10 January 2023

Achieve nirvana, remain concious, as you are elevatted

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Cristobal Benjumea 10 January 2023

A poem about the extacy of contemplating beauty, love ,

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 10 January 2023

superb just fantastic to read; I enjoyed fully; congrats for being selected as POD

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Rob Lamberton 03 January 2023

I've been enjoying the migrating geese. Lots of snow this year! ! TFS

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Karen Sinclair 06 July 2012

Absolutely lovely visuals and flow...tyvm karen

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Vincent Kuo 27 May 2012

Wow! What vivid personification, so beautifully put together with great imagination! Very beautiful, fantastical poem! By any chance inspired partially by the song Snowbird by Anne Murray?

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Walterrean Salley 19 May 2012

Those lucky snow birds. Must be nice to be so free. Fine job, Val.

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Danny Draper 07 May 2012

A fine poem with beautifully lyrical imagery.

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Joseph Anderson 06 May 2012

The verdict is in-Its a10. Delightful metaphoric imagery-It shall linger in my mind

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Smoky Hoss 05 May 2012

Serene, peaceful, beautiful. A pure pleasure to read.

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Patti Masterman 04 May 2012

It's absolutely perfect.

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Wendy Thopliss 29 April 2012

Such a lovely poem Valerie, a really good read.

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Ken E Hall 29 April 2012

Great nature poem of the reality of snow birds migrating to warmer lands and the writer presents finesse in its presentation +++10...regards

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Ramesh Rai 29 April 2012

with title it appears to b imaination bt after reading it comes real

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Captain Cur 28 April 2012

The Captain gives you a ten Valerie. Each verse builds on the other in a seamless flight.

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