Thursday, April 16, 2009

The Snow Comments

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The Snow
He takes me out
In to the cold
Out of the heat
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Willow her
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 April 2009

It falls from the sky As delicate as flowers Like white cotton balls Falling from the heavens Beautiful poem clad in white. Keep writing, Willow. Best Wishes Naseer

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ata khan 21 April 2009

Really, your snow looks so beautiful. Simple writing with a great flow, Thanks a lot for sharing

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Corey Threet 17 April 2009

Yeah in this poem you make snow sound pretty but in Buffalo we get snow in April...now so majestic anymore lol. Great write though I appreciate you putting it up there makes me wanna start liking snow again. Maybe next winter. Great write and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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