Saturday, January 12, 2008

The Snow Comments

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Its snowing again,
but the sun shines outside,
the memories surround me,
they captured me,
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Craig Saunders
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Josie Whitehead 12 January 2008

Ah - I thought this would be a nice poem about the world of nature. You turned it inwards at yourself in a depressing way and really spoilt what could have been so enjoyable. Better to look outwards than inwards because in times of trouble this really helps you through it.

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Craig Saunders

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Calgary Alberta Canada
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