Saturday, February 17, 2007

The Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The snow lay like a blanket upon the ground
The trees & bushes it does surround
In spots its dirty in spots its clean
Why does the dirt have to mess up the scene
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Bonnie B Long
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Geoff Warden 17 February 2007

Fantastic read Bonnie, flows like a stream to it's river from start to finish, , well done

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