The Snake Comments

the snake is presented in very symbolical manner/rich with allusion

Gosh huh hu snake…fine and dramatic… Ms. Nivedita UK

Dear Tamara Most poems you full of metaphor. And yes one way of obligation. in the meantime you know to use words. and I invite you to write a comment on my new poem 19522425 - Grieve not ………… thanks.

LADY, YOU CAN WRITE.ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT NEVER B4 HAD I READ A POEM LIKE THAT, N I PROBALY NEVER WILL.UNLESS SOME COPYCAT LOOKING FOR AN OUTRAGIOUS THEME, TO MAKE ONES THOUGHTS N MIND SCREAM, ABOUT YOUR DREAM DOES...BRILLIANT 10S

it is there underneath as well, waiting for the return of the dare of the snake on the floor..you forgets, gracious mother in sand, your feet are bare, buff and safe...iip

Dramatically well penned.........fabulous poem....so expressive in uniqueness...10+++

a complex dream turn to a short poem... u paint ur dream very well.... creative poems.

Very brave description of a complex dream. The write is amazingly refreshing. In some form of medine though (I forget which system it is) dreaming of snakes heralds good times ahead.

scary dream, , but its any ways, , dream, , dreams are only dreams, while they some times gives us a happiness or some times a bad mood that might we scare.. any ways, , who afraid a snakes so he or she will meet it.. lets not think so much about any scarey dreams, even we should try to think about a happiness instead of a sadness.. dear writer.. you are an amazing poet who knows how to pen those feelings which you got through your dream.. 10+++

Hi Tamara. And why would I fear such a wonderful depiction. We try to escape 'The Snake' and the venomous poison a deadly snake, with a bite makes. But acknowledgement is the 'key' to enlighten those who not before have seen. Nice.

Such snakes like people are everywhere in everyone's life. Dreams are true reflections of our souls. You are a blessed soul, Tamara. May God keep you safe from people like snakes. Beautiful write with true logics. Best Wishes Naseer

wow that must have been one powerfully scry dream for you to write such a beautiful poem about it. i love it.

oh what a kind of dream, ! ! ! quite apprehensive, and fear provoking, as seemingly stronger one tries to oppress over the weak to dissolve its fill...now a days when ever we happen to find such snake, if it is poisonous we try to take away the poison teeth, so that if at all bites, nothing happens.........wonderful dream by truth of reason by such conjecture, ingenious write by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

it is a good creative one with some words in capital letters used to heighten the tense mood.

I really enjoyed it but...leaves a lot of place for thought. Thanks though.

Enjoyed the dream, perplexed to wonder if there is a meaning for you...snakes alive is good you were not born a little chick..thanks for the read, regards

very cryptic, I guess the dream that is hidden in plain sight, But who's sight? no matter a snake is a snake trust your dreams. this one leaves me in wonder

They says, snakes come in dreams bring a good omen. A great write Enjoyed Thanks for sharing with me.

Your poem is a maze itself; once you reach the other side you can't help but feel a sense of satisfaction. Enjoyed the anecdote, shined a light on an obscurity. Very cool.

A very disturbing dream full of shadows and potent symbolism. I hope that it has no basis in reality. You have a flair for drama. Excellent write. Warmest regards, Sandra