Sunday, August 8, 2010

The Snake Comments

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The snake is long, long, long and long
The snake is black, green, yellow, red, stripes and spot
The is coloured , colourful and colourless
The snake is clever, resilience and courageous son of land
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David Aoloch Bion
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Michael Morgan 03 September 2014

This is a very nice poem- totally un-hackneyed approach to a much-vilified creature. The snake is redeemed in literary terms, . Though the English could be cleaned-up, and I don't think snakes eat fruit, the summary verdict, in emotional terms is refreshingly positive. MM

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