The Snail Comments

'And like a snail I crawl Out towards you…' - A lovely expression, couldn't be better!

Look at the opposites of human nature occurring at the same time and within the same relationships. What an awful contrast. It reminds me of Ghalib when he says- Usi ko dekh kar jeete hain, jis zalim pe dam nikle (Isn't it an irony that we live by seeing the one for whom we are ready to sacrifice our life) . It is no doubt a wonderful piece of poetry. Thanks.

Nice thinking, nice poem.

so very true nice write