Sunday, December 13, 2009

The Smog In The Mind. Comments

Rating: 5.0

in the city
the smog rises
heavenwards,
making distance
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Ejaz Khan 20 December 2009

A deep write, full of words of wisdom, thanks for sharing! 10

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Raj Nandy 14 December 2009

A WELL COMPOSED AND A THOUGHT PROVOKING POEM! 10! LET THE FIRE OF TRUE KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING BROUGHT BY PROMETHEUS TO MANKIND, DISPEL THE LURKING GLOOM IN OUR HUMAN MINDS! - Raj

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