Friday, April 28, 2006

The Smile She Gave Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

It came from her but within myself too,
She gave me that quiet confidence boost,
Just simple words and the odd I love you,
But that smile, it made up for the most,
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Phil Whittaker
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Riquetta Elliott 08 May 2008

This is a very nice and sweet poem Phil keep it up.

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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 01 May 2006

That is the sweetest thing ever! Aww lol etc. It's simplicity but so much more- she is one lucky girl! Talk to ya later, :) xXx

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Dana Tyrrell 28 April 2006

a very sweet and tragic poem, i truly hope you tell this person how you feel smiling at you, ~Dana~

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