Wednesday, January 30, 2008

The Smile Of Summer Comments

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The first young breath of Summer
Is all it takes
And I'm falling through the years.
Fragments of a life
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jane solanrobertson
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Midnight Clarity 13 February 2008

The first young breath of Summer Is all it takes And I'm falling through the years. Fragments of a life That left their mark on a weary face Are condensed into nothing. Very evocative; these six lines stand alone beautifully, inviting the reader to add their memories to complete the circuit you have created. I like this very much.

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jane solanrobertson

jane solanrobertson

warrington, england
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