Sunday, May 25, 2008

The Smile Comments

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The world was burning
Our race stopped learning
And she just smiled
Life seemed more hard
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Fahim Sayed 25 May 2008

Great work pal....all we need it smile....true... Fahim

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Saiirahh Shiiahh 25 May 2008

Only one thing i can say....Wow! what a great poem! I read your other poem...smoke screen and uhhhh let me just say *Cough* Cough*Hack*Spit; P It was good too! smoking is bad tho! ! ! ~Saiirahh

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