The Smell Came Back Comments

So do I, Michael, so do I. Onk, OnkOnk, Onk. H

The allegoric symbolism of this poem is stunning. I hope the (woman?) poet reads it...

Actually Allan, do you think I ought to reveal that the smell is coming from the Panhandle where the Longhorns roam? So that our northern plants don't suffer from shock. What do you think? H

Well, you do inspire passion Herbert, I gotta give you that! ! AND, I loved this, metaphor, symbolism or just about a Fart, no matter, It was great. Keep it up.10+

any kind of publicity is good publicity

I seem to have lost the address to the Herbascious (sic) Manor (sic) . You really were at the scene of the crime, not the first time even, but perhaps it was a dear friend of yours. In any case it does take tremendous courage to mark a 1.

To be honest old Herbascious i havent voted for this at all, i like the fact that you have set it out in an interesting manor, but i dont know about the underlining metaphore. write one of your regular poems like this, and there could be hope yet a young one

Herbert perhaps the little dark haired englishman gave you a one was, because he thought he might have been the smell you were referring to in the poem such is life if he didn't like the poem, dont give it any points, ask him is he going to do another self portrait poem, i like those Warm regards allan

Thanks A................................................ H

Well thanks Graham, for the vote of confidence. Is it because you are struggling to become a poet and have your doubts? Or perhaps just boredom in merry cold England. Well, a 1 is better than a O